farfetched in a wrong way
Well, can't say it was very funny, didn't like the voice after a while, did at the start though... I think you shouldn't be so consistant in your humor. It's funny to include this as a short, but don't discus more than 1 thing to do with the arm and go on being random more drastically, don't continue about the arm, it just... wears down the movie. You excecuted it nicely and it's still a praiseworthy achievement, but it'd be better if you revise your humor. Let it be quicker, intenser and less focussed
what's it symbolise?
You say it's strictly symbolic... ok, obviously people are not born that way. So what does it symbolize? Where's the big analogy? movie is above ok and only little beneath actually very good, it's... More than very decent!, but explain what you're symbolising.
If you had read some other reviews you'd have seen what i ment. I explained it a few times. But here it goes again, It symbolizes the people who don't think for themself. They believe everything they are told. And they don't question things. It symbolizes those people. They act like they are 'programmed' to do what they are told.
YOU MUST CREDIT ALL THE MUSIC YOU USE, EVEN THE RELIANT K BIT! IF YOU DON'T.... I will never like you :'(
Did you even watch the credits?
ofcourse it's hard work, his argument however wat: it's pointless, and that's right, and that's a correct argument, don't blame him for not mentioning the effort, it's all out of the question.
my opinion... yeah nice, good short, you've got talent now go make longer stuff with scripts or what not... not just funny shorts
anywho nice jorb
Nice Excecution, horrible concept.
I've absolutely nothing bad to say about the graphics or the way it was presented. That was in it's own aspect pulled off wonderfully. However the topic is horribly cliché and unrealistic, please if it's about abuse being horrible, then take a human victim. Don't go for that man treats machine badly, it's technically just stupid.
I've seen enough guys turn into angels for one lifetime by now... well good look fishing at the cemetary anyway...
you animate perfectly, now you just need to get some sophistication in that pretty way of yours.
just one tip: conventional themes = bad themes
other than that I would like to congratulate you with the ownership of talent and the ability to get something done, now go out there and prove this is not because of a dronish discipline or a horribly great admiration for other people's work. Rather: find the balance between getting sick of clichés and pushing on to get something done and become an artist not only loved but also remembered
Tis nice! More than the movie though I like your spirit. And I just need to go hooray for female flash artists! Electric media just tend to take a while before attracting female users. But now we get the other gender expressing their artistic souls as well. Huzzah!
that's is wholly true as females have other things to obsess with, their appearances and shopping and chatting with friends and what not. I've always loved my computer and so when I finally got a chance at flash, I thought, why not? Very proud to say I am also self taught *gloats* lol. Thankies for the review and your very own spirit. You are awesome for writing what you did :)
Well that was neat, this should probably teach people that art can't be shared with the masses, or at least shouldn't be expected to be picked up by the masses. masses are dumb and annoying anyway as they are constantly refilled with stupider folk because the topic becomes more accessible and popular. nice idea, one question, not implying anything: how did you keep yourself to the project? how often did you have to fight laziness? to me that's the most admirable thing: anyone can learn to animate and eventually learn to draw, and anyone can make up ideas as great as anything when they spend enough time in creating something and improving himself. But doing it is reserved for the persevering, how did you come to be so?
I have a passion for animation.
So what's this? A seinfield parody?
I don't understand what excactly you tried to achieve... is it the same seinfield like humor you tried to accomplish by just havind some.... stuff move about doing that sketch with computer voices? or was it just one of those awful attempts at a movie just for the sake of cameo'ing some characters nobody cares about but the creator... and a few sick people....
I can't really explain myself completely because it's all so... dreadfully obvious
thank you for that bliteringly insulting review.
I do this for fun and as a hobby, not to be ripped apart by you self proclaimed "critics".
If you want to completely strip someone of their self confidence do it to peopel who deserve it.
It seems we got ourselves a new favorite
Dear mister lobster-something,
You have now officially been recognised as a fully fledged wielder of precious originality. With this I mean the awesome humorous atmosphere present in nearly all your flashes, it's not something everyone can enjoy as much as the other but it's certainly something I've come to like a
However I must warn you to not get lazy and stop improving your style, because it's the progressiveness in your ideas that made them special you should keep progressing and experimenting with new ideas.
We do love fernando. lord sexington, horseman and Gofur (or whatever) man. They are heroes worthy of our attention. Very good character design however I do think you made them up on feeling and didn't so much conciously concieve them.
In any case, great work, stuff of legends
- Maurice Mulder
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